Post by UrusaiiKiyami on Apr 25, 2003 13:03:31 GMT -5
So...Yeah... My [soon to be manga company] Company is working on a manga and well i've summarized the manga into a fanfic...
Tell us how you like it!(If so we might accually put some good time into trying to make are own manga making company,and proof that Americans don't suck at making manga)
It is the year 20XX,A.D humans have began colinization,due to many problems on the Earth. But the Peace in the colinies wouldn't last long, The Space Fleet of Mars has attacked the Earths colonies in hopes of warning the humans that they are not wanted by Mars in the Solar System,This causes Space Station Agrash to crash into the Earth.
Angered of this the Earth Governments of Japan,Russia,China,Korea,And Neo America take action and head to space. But before they left people from the Mars army had stolen some of the Earth's best Mobile Suits and Super Robots.
The Earth's fleet then flew to Mars,In hopes of shutting down Space Stations,and causing a blockade of there base,which was done when they got there. But unluckily there had been a mars spie in the Earth fleet who then wen't to the Earth fleets base and stole there Destruction Cannon.
As Earth got into Space,They had a feirce battle with the Mars fleet where many colonies where damaged,and many Mars and Earth fighters where killed. Knowing that fighting was getting them no where and the Cannon was charging on Mars carreir
two Japanese fighters go on an undercover mission to disarm the base.
Edgar tended to look toward me,Opening his mouth and said " You heard him right! We have to disarm that laser" Not looking serious I sighed "And...,Might as well let them get me too... They killed the rest of my family... Every one of them!" his bodie then shook and he yelled "Then don't you want to get revenge!?!" I then furiously said "fool!... Revenge is for cowards!"
I clearly wasn't thinking if revenge is for cowards then I was calling myself that,Maybe I am... how I sinfully killed the Mars general with my mech. But still... What they did was wrong! The past is the past now Mars well fall at the power of my hands!.
The Mars General was seen looking out into space from the Mars cruiser "So The Earthlings have finally reached are orbit..."He then took a smoke on his Kalbajin(A Mars ciggerate) " As smoke left his mouth he stated "No matter the beam shall take care of them!".
A tall Mars man came through the door overhearing the General speak to himself "Truly... You relie to much on the beam cannon!... Its not invincible,Surely you know this!" The General put his hand down quickly "Which is why we must send a fleet of Marizans to make my plan..." Rashi then interrupted " Your plan?" The General furiously repleid" As I was saying! ,We send a group of Marizan spies to blow up the Earths ship... From there,We head to the Earth and cause a living hell for there people" The General then laughed evily.
Back at the Earth's base in the hallway:
Quietly I walked down the hallway thinking, If I was right to kill so many innocent Marzians just to complete the mission. But how they just celebrated after the hell they caused on Earth! Maybe they deserved to die!.
I walked quickly down the hallway "d**n, Just thinkin' back to that day,It burns me" I said,After that i walked further down the hallway "But the past is the past! Mars shall fall!" . I had heard loud steps behind me,Edgar had finally caught up. Out of his mouth came the words "Talking to yourself again I see, Shows a bad social life" angerly I repleid " Shutup! Its ***holes like you that make me like this!" He then said in a shoft voice "Don't blame me for your problems boy... Anyway follow my orders and we'll be fine". With anger I said " I'm sick of your mouth old man!" I pulled a grenade from my pants pocket "Take this grenade as an early fathers day present!" He then gasped and said "What the hell are you doing!" I threw the grenade into his stomach.
Seconds later the grenade exploded in his stomach, Blood was spit up from his mouth, But i had to do it... He was only going to get in the way of my mission! luckily I fired low enough so that he'd only be out for a few minutes If i had thrown it to a higher part of his stomach he would surely be dead.
I was seen walking down the halls of the launch area thinking about what I did to Edgar the words "I have to learn to controll my anger,But how can i with ***holes like him around" In my ears a large alarm was heard ringing quietly i said "Hm... Whats that alarm?" I saw 3 soilders run down the hallways "Stop right there you muderer" All three of them had said,quickly after punched me. "Hm... So i'm guessing you wanna fight huh? bring it on!".
1 of the soilders quickly charged a punch at me,Quickly had I dodged "Oh come on! Your gonna have to be quicker then that!" He had then kneed that soilder in the stomach,Tons of blood was seen flieing from the soilders mouth. I then jumped to another soilder and quickly took the gun out of his hand "Hey!,No fair!... You have a weapon and I don't,bull..." I then punched the soilder onto the ground,Causing blood to splatter all over the floor. But then quietly another soilder came from behind me quietly for some reason i couldn't sense him... "So... you wanna play like that! Be gone to sleep!" A Sleep dart was fired to my back quickly I had gotten drouzy... The last thing i heard was a young girl say"Stop! He can't help..." ....
Well Kyosuke get to the Mars carreir in time to stop Mars from firing? Who is this mysterious girl?
Hey Kyosuke here... On the next episode of Mobile Fighter Takashi We finally make it into space... But while where in space we encounter some dangerous members of the Mars fleet,Yeah,You guessed it a big battle is to come...
Thats all for mobile fighter Takashi! Issue 1 Volume 1!
And LueyFubar I did not tripple post on that other topic and clearly think you need a better hence of the definition of tripple posting
Tell us how you like it!(If so we might accually put some good time into trying to make are own manga making company,and proof that Americans don't suck at making manga)
It is the year 20XX,A.D humans have began colinization,due to many problems on the Earth. But the Peace in the colinies wouldn't last long, The Space Fleet of Mars has attacked the Earths colonies in hopes of warning the humans that they are not wanted by Mars in the Solar System,This causes Space Station Agrash to crash into the Earth.
Angered of this the Earth Governments of Japan,Russia,China,Korea,And Neo America take action and head to space. But before they left people from the Mars army had stolen some of the Earth's best Mobile Suits and Super Robots.
The Earth's fleet then flew to Mars,In hopes of shutting down Space Stations,and causing a blockade of there base,which was done when they got there. But unluckily there had been a mars spie in the Earth fleet who then wen't to the Earth fleets base and stole there Destruction Cannon.
As Earth got into Space,They had a feirce battle with the Mars fleet where many colonies where damaged,and many Mars and Earth fighters where killed. Knowing that fighting was getting them no where and the Cannon was charging on Mars carreir
two Japanese fighters go on an undercover mission to disarm the base.
Edgar tended to look toward me,Opening his mouth and said " You heard him right! We have to disarm that laser" Not looking serious I sighed "And...,Might as well let them get me too... They killed the rest of my family... Every one of them!" his bodie then shook and he yelled "Then don't you want to get revenge!?!" I then furiously said "fool!... Revenge is for cowards!"
I clearly wasn't thinking if revenge is for cowards then I was calling myself that,Maybe I am... how I sinfully killed the Mars general with my mech. But still... What they did was wrong! The past is the past now Mars well fall at the power of my hands!.
The Mars General was seen looking out into space from the Mars cruiser "So The Earthlings have finally reached are orbit..."He then took a smoke on his Kalbajin(A Mars ciggerate) " As smoke left his mouth he stated "No matter the beam shall take care of them!".
A tall Mars man came through the door overhearing the General speak to himself "Truly... You relie to much on the beam cannon!... Its not invincible,Surely you know this!" The General put his hand down quickly "Which is why we must send a fleet of Marizans to make my plan..." Rashi then interrupted " Your plan?" The General furiously repleid" As I was saying! ,We send a group of Marizan spies to blow up the Earths ship... From there,We head to the Earth and cause a living hell for there people" The General then laughed evily.
Back at the Earth's base in the hallway:
Quietly I walked down the hallway thinking, If I was right to kill so many innocent Marzians just to complete the mission. But how they just celebrated after the hell they caused on Earth! Maybe they deserved to die!.
I walked quickly down the hallway "d**n, Just thinkin' back to that day,It burns me" I said,After that i walked further down the hallway "But the past is the past! Mars shall fall!" . I had heard loud steps behind me,Edgar had finally caught up. Out of his mouth came the words "Talking to yourself again I see, Shows a bad social life" angerly I repleid " Shutup! Its ***holes like you that make me like this!" He then said in a shoft voice "Don't blame me for your problems boy... Anyway follow my orders and we'll be fine". With anger I said " I'm sick of your mouth old man!" I pulled a grenade from my pants pocket "Take this grenade as an early fathers day present!" He then gasped and said "What the hell are you doing!" I threw the grenade into his stomach.
Seconds later the grenade exploded in his stomach, Blood was spit up from his mouth, But i had to do it... He was only going to get in the way of my mission! luckily I fired low enough so that he'd only be out for a few minutes If i had thrown it to a higher part of his stomach he would surely be dead.
I was seen walking down the halls of the launch area thinking about what I did to Edgar the words "I have to learn to controll my anger,But how can i with ***holes like him around" In my ears a large alarm was heard ringing quietly i said "Hm... Whats that alarm?" I saw 3 soilders run down the hallways "Stop right there you muderer" All three of them had said,quickly after punched me. "Hm... So i'm guessing you wanna fight huh? bring it on!".
1 of the soilders quickly charged a punch at me,Quickly had I dodged "Oh come on! Your gonna have to be quicker then that!" He had then kneed that soilder in the stomach,Tons of blood was seen flieing from the soilders mouth. I then jumped to another soilder and quickly took the gun out of his hand "Hey!,No fair!... You have a weapon and I don't,bull..." I then punched the soilder onto the ground,Causing blood to splatter all over the floor. But then quietly another soilder came from behind me quietly for some reason i couldn't sense him... "So... you wanna play like that! Be gone to sleep!" A Sleep dart was fired to my back quickly I had gotten drouzy... The last thing i heard was a young girl say"Stop! He can't help..." ....
Well Kyosuke get to the Mars carreir in time to stop Mars from firing? Who is this mysterious girl?
Hey Kyosuke here... On the next episode of Mobile Fighter Takashi We finally make it into space... But while where in space we encounter some dangerous members of the Mars fleet,Yeah,You guessed it a big battle is to come...
Thats all for mobile fighter Takashi! Issue 1 Volume 1!
And LueyFubar I did not tripple post on that other topic and clearly think you need a better hence of the definition of tripple posting
