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Post by Chickensoupcheese on Jan 14, 2003 2:30:21 GMT -5
This is something which I've been thinking of putting down for a while, but I thought I might as well. It might be a little patchy, but that's because it's how I wrote it originally.
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I return home From the eternal rain. Drenched and miserable.
I try to shake It off, but I am still Drenched and miserable.
I get a gift; Didn't think I wanted It. An umbrella.
I return home From the eternal rain. Dry and a smile on my face.
I never leave home without it.
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Post by TheNeanderthal on Jan 28, 2003 14:30:31 GMT -5
Hahaha.... expected comedy from you
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Post by Chickensoupcheese on Jan 28, 2003 16:54:18 GMT -5
Do you mean it's funny, or you were expecting it to be funny?
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Post by TheNeanderthal on Jan 29, 2003 5:20:51 GMT -5
I expected it to be funny, and it was.
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Post by Illest on Jan 30, 2003 3:31:42 GMT -5
It was a good poem
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Post by The~Inquisitor on Feb 3, 2003 17:30:50 GMT -5
Doesn't rhyme... Hate poems that don't rhyme.
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Post by TheNeanderthal on Feb 4, 2003 6:05:36 GMT -5
Hey CSC, you're talented . Comics, poems...
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