my game Star Nova...

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STORY-A long time ago, a disaster happened on the land of Schandral. In this disaster, many monsters called "Odaks" invaded the land, tearing everything into dust.


Everyone tough this was the end of everything. But then a hero appeared, along with three more heros. They travelled part by part of the kingdon and destroyed the "Odaks".


However, in the final battle against "Sin", the ultimate "Odak", all of then suddenlly disapeared. No one knew the name of this heroes.


This disaster was called, in the future, the "Star Nova". It was recorded in many history books, and people were very interested in it. The main subject in history classes was the "Star Nova", and everyone wanted to have known the name of the heroes that saved the world.


In the town of Runassor, in the south of Schandral, a boy named Flitt is very interested in find out about this heroes. Barely he knows that his past has everything to do with them...



I know, it is cliche, but i´m gonna change it. I´m gonna change the name 'Sin' also...

[LueyFubar]

Bah-Ha! You did the same thing as me, d**n cookies!

Anyway, It has a slight ring of cliché in it but not too bad. It has a good ring of mysteque in it. Develop it further and it could be a winner.

Good luck, mystery man. heh heh.

[BLREMaster]

ya, d**n cookies!
BTW, I´m the creator of this game...

[xXxLuCkyxDrAg0nxXx]

Sharpen up the story a bit, the the game might do well.

[BLREMaster]

sad fact: my game was going pretty well, nut my CPU was busted. I lost all my games, and I´m not gonna make it again.
Check out my new game: user.domaindlx.com/rpgarena/Action_ViewEntry.asp?ID=717

[Nivoraw]

[glow=blue,2,300]Yea I agree, it does have some elements of a cliche, in the storyline much some of it is quite unique, I look forward to it! ;D[/glow]

[Cereal Hunter]

"Sin"?

Change the name.

[Legend]

Star Nova?
It does sound familiar! Any way, it does sound very very good! it is a bit like the game i'm making but my game isn't that good! you'll have to send me copy of it since the website you put it on isn't working for some strange reason which is very ANNOYING!!!!
If you send me a copy of itthen i'll send you the copy of the game that i'm making (It won't be V. Good because i only got it the other month and i'm also 13!)
but we could also help each other and make the ultimate game! Agreed? if you send a rply to me give me your Email and I'll give you mine!

[Tool 666]

You'd be right in thinking that name sounds familiar cause it was used in a series of Arcade shooters on Pc in the mid-90s.

not to worry...