Kegan
RPG Townie
I hate you Milkman Dan.
Posts: 599
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Post by Kegan on Dec 8, 2002 19:17:22 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]THanks for sticking up for me Busterman!lol ;D[/glow]
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Post by Busterman Zero on Dec 8, 2002 21:04:22 GMT -5
No problem. Usually when I put something down that means it really IS crap.
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Post by ObviousDelirium on Dec 9, 2002 10:51:49 GMT -5
The story is better this way,keep up the good work!
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Post by The~Inquisitor on Dec 9, 2002 11:20:30 GMT -5
Busterman, respect your fellow Townies. Zanifer may find the story totally crap, however he did not give much of a reason for his view, but there is no reason to lash out at him, you could have just asked him why he thinks that.
As for the story...Demons...revenge for a family members death, cliche and boring. I would have to agree with Zanifer, Kegan, you probably don't want to hear bad comments about your story but it is honestly the best way to know you need to improve it.
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Kegan
RPG Townie
I hate you Milkman Dan.
Posts: 599
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Post by Kegan on Dec 9, 2002 18:25:07 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Very true Inquisitor. Well anyways Im using the second plot as basically a "mold" for my game, it will be based on that but with no demons and such. Hopefully when a get a better story line happining I will post for comments,lol! ;D[/glow]
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Post by Busterman Zero on Dec 9, 2002 21:03:03 GMT -5
Sorry for getting angry, but I get mad when people say games or whatever suck without giving reasons. I am sorry, and I'll admit I was a little drink. I'll leave myself a note saying to never post after a party.
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Josh Yuy
RPG Townie
"Republic Leader."
Posts: 414
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Post by Josh Yuy on Dec 10, 2002 14:22:03 GMT -5
Hey I see you have problems with naming? well you have asked the right person!. How about "Leganku Tiamant." "The Nebula Saga."
"Archna Uawellmc."
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