Kegan
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Post by Kegan on Dec 4, 2002 21:54:06 GMT -5
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Hello everyone, this is my first time on this forum and I started a new RM2K game and I'm absolutly stumped for a title! Any suggestions would be greatly appreaciated!! The plot of the game is the main characters father was killed when he was a young boy, the main character pushed the man into a lava pit and 10 years later he returns for you to find out hes a demon and your the only one to stop him! So you start out on a quest to save mankind!!lol so any suggestions for a name or comments(good or bad) on the plot would be great!!Thanks alot!
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Post by The~Inquisitor on Dec 5, 2002 11:58:40 GMT -5
No name, sorry.
Absolutely terrible storyline, sorry.
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Post by Busterman Zero on Dec 5, 2002 19:16:56 GMT -5
Sorry, but all I can think of is crappy names like 'Demon Saga,' and 'Demon Vengance.' Hmm..., I'll edit this post when I come up with a good one.
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Kegan
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Post by Kegan on Dec 5, 2002 19:59:04 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Ok,well I got a bit of a better plot,its not much but anyways here it goes!
Ok, the main evil is the ruler of some evil kingdom and kills the main characters dad because hes the leader of a band of rebel outlaws, and they're trying to overthrow him, the hero now has to bring the outlaws back from the ashes and return them to their former glory to stand against him.I know this isant much but tell me what you think please, any suggestions would be greatly appreaciated!!Thanks[/glow]
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Post by Busterman Zero on Dec 5, 2002 21:31:28 GMT -5
Hmm...again all I get is stuff like 'Risen from the Ashes' and 'For his Father's Dream.' I'll edit if I get something.
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Post by TheNeanderthal on Dec 6, 2002 4:14:51 GMT -5
Liked the 2nd storyline better. Maybe you should call it Kingdom Vengance, Kingdom Blood or.. how about... Avenged Blood?
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AgentLane
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Post by AgentLane on Dec 6, 2002 4:45:53 GMT -5
I can't really get a sense of what tone your rpg is going be, but here's some ideas off the top of my head.
Old fashioned: Outlaw Rising
Oldie but goody: Uprising of the Blood
Comic: My Kingdom for a Coffin
Bond says: You only Burn Twice
New Age RPG: Diabolic Intent
Hah, well hopefully some seriousness came out of this. Hope some of it helped! ;D
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Post by ObviousDelirium on Dec 6, 2002 15:18:00 GMT -5
How about:Kingdom of the d**ned,that's all I can think of...I'm sure there are better names then that.For the story,I say it isn't really original...sorry...
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Post by The~Inquisitor on Dec 6, 2002 17:16:29 GMT -5
The story is still unimpressive (Sorry to make me look like the badguy here), but I think you should try harder. Be outrageous.
Also sorry about the fact that I cannot think up a storyline for you nor title.
Think of different scenes youd find really cool, then try to make a story around them and fitting them into a big story.
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Kegan
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Post by Kegan on Dec 7, 2002 13:42:30 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Ok,well first of all, I wanna say thanks for telling me that the story is no good,becuase they weren't and would probibly end up deleted anyways..So Im starting a whole new game..This still might not be up to your expectations Thy,lol! But anyways here it goes. You are a leadr of a band of treasure hunters, the king of the world you live in(no name yet becuase this story is not in stone)wants you to find him a legendary weapon that will bring order to the world and If you dont fetch it for him he will kill your father. So you set out trying to find clues and information on the lost weapon, on the way you find out that the king wants to use the sword for evil,you decide to keep the sword for yourself and try to bring down his kingdom. While digging up the sword you open up a portal to another demesion. Out of the portal hordes of monsters start pouring out. You have no choice but you use the weapon and save your world!  [/glow] |
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Kegan
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Post by Kegan on Dec 7, 2002 13:44:12 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Please tell me what you think! ;D[/glow]
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Post by The~Inquisitor on Dec 7, 2002 13:59:03 GMT -5
Try to refrain from using the main hero's father (or family member type) and demons in the story...
It's rather cliche...
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Kegan
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Post by Kegan on Dec 7, 2002 14:04:04 GMT -5
[glow=green,2,300]Ok, I guess I'll change it yet again, what do you think about the rest of the story?[/glow]
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Post by zanifer on Dec 8, 2002 17:01:45 GMT -5
how bout ---- this is a crapy game
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Post by Busterman Zero on Dec 8, 2002 17:20:53 GMT -5
Okay, Zanifer, you are really one-minded. I think it sounds good. I've read a lot of your posts. Do you have ANYTHING constructive to say?
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