Post by Akira on Dec 26, 2002 10:43:46 GMT -5
Alright, I need to get my plot critiqued, and I figure this would be one of the best places to do it...
*JUST SOME BACKGROUND*
My story takes place on a world called Terra-Cana, due to its triple moons the majority of the world is flooded, but it has mostly a sub-tropical climate. (with the exception of the far north of course)
The year is 5072 (but this game still takes place in a medieval era) The Holy Trintity* (Holy Lunar Empire, Deslalia, Romada) has been at war with the coailated nations (Gont, Parcylia, Avalonia, Kyamari, Hideka) for a year and eight months and both sides have been at a bloody stalemate.
*NOW FOR THE ACTUAL STORY*
Fuse(name subject to change) and Blade are 'Explorers' for Avalonia, they're currently visiting one of Avalonia's distant colonies up further north, searching for Crystalline, a rare form of energy used by Avalonia's enemies to mass produce demons and other weapons because The Holy Trinitity was outnumbered almost 2 to 1 at the outbreak of the war. While in this small village, Fuse and Blade stumble across the town shrine, where a young priestess, Ailia, lives, she offers to show them the Crystalline, for Blade, and Fuse, to take samples. When the party reaches the Crystalline, they're attacked by 'demons' of sorts, they're eventually overpowered and are sent down a river.
Miraculously the group wakes up on the island west of the starting town (Kanika) they travel over a small mountain range and wind up in the next town, short on cash to catch a ferry to head back, they hear that an assasin has killed the town elder, and their's a large bounty, so they follow in pusuit.
When they reach the elder's mansion it's basically the first true *dungeon*, they find the Assasin (Aryn) at the top, after a battle three spies for the Holy Trintity show up, Aryn's injured, but he swears on what little honour he's got that he'll help the group if Fuse and the others fight off these spies who have been in pusuit of Aryn for some time now (the reason why we'll be explained later in the game) well they rescue Aryn and he joins the party, when they're about to board the ferry a messenger from Avalonia walks up to Fuse, Fuse and his friends have been called down south to Europia to fight on some far off front for Avalonia against a new offensive by Deslalia, and that's the end of the demo... ;D ;D ;D
*JUST SOME BACKGROUND*
My story takes place on a world called Terra-Cana, due to its triple moons the majority of the world is flooded, but it has mostly a sub-tropical climate. (with the exception of the far north of course)
The year is 5072 (but this game still takes place in a medieval era) The Holy Trintity* (Holy Lunar Empire, Deslalia, Romada) has been at war with the coailated nations (Gont, Parcylia, Avalonia, Kyamari, Hideka) for a year and eight months and both sides have been at a bloody stalemate.
*NOW FOR THE ACTUAL STORY*
Fuse(name subject to change) and Blade are 'Explorers' for Avalonia, they're currently visiting one of Avalonia's distant colonies up further north, searching for Crystalline, a rare form of energy used by Avalonia's enemies to mass produce demons and other weapons because The Holy Trinitity was outnumbered almost 2 to 1 at the outbreak of the war. While in this small village, Fuse and Blade stumble across the town shrine, where a young priestess, Ailia, lives, she offers to show them the Crystalline, for Blade, and Fuse, to take samples. When the party reaches the Crystalline, they're attacked by 'demons' of sorts, they're eventually overpowered and are sent down a river.
Miraculously the group wakes up on the island west of the starting town (Kanika) they travel over a small mountain range and wind up in the next town, short on cash to catch a ferry to head back, they hear that an assasin has killed the town elder, and their's a large bounty, so they follow in pusuit.
When they reach the elder's mansion it's basically the first true *dungeon*, they find the Assasin (Aryn) at the top, after a battle three spies for the Holy Trintity show up, Aryn's injured, but he swears on what little honour he's got that he'll help the group if Fuse and the others fight off these spies who have been in pusuit of Aryn for some time now (the reason why we'll be explained later in the game) well they rescue Aryn and he joins the party, when they're about to board the ferry a messenger from Avalonia walks up to Fuse, Fuse and his friends have been called down south to Europia to fight on some far off front for Avalonia against a new offensive by Deslalia, and that's the end of the demo... ;D ;D ;D
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