Post by SickAndWretched on Aug 28, 2003 17:53:08 GMT -5
Its an idea for a writen stroy side thing, instead of a game. 'Cause I had an idea for a fan game, but I don't have the time to be working on a game all day.. So instead I would write stort stories that would be released like once a month or so. I have the general idea for the story and I sent an e-mail to Kamau already. Though he hasn't said anything back to me, I understand that he's most likely busy with stuff, and I had alot of a spelling mistakes (spelled Avalon wrong.. *smacks self in the head*)
There might be some spoilers.. y'know.
Anyway here is the idea: The setting is a in the way into the future. Judging from the time-line, I'll put it somewhere around the year 5000 HD. And basically the world of Beryllusir has change much and forgotten much of its history due to the growing levity of the newer grenations and the lack of Dansa keeping mankind down. Many things that were common place are now rare, or decerations (like orbs, and swords and such). Cities have grown so large that the merge together, creating subburbs and other areas. Most of the people have grown tired of the governments in the world, yet are to lazy to raise up and attemp revolution. So, basically it would become alot like how things are on earth.. with the exception of the other races, like Fellans, Kobolds, etc. The races generally keep themselves seperately and its generally looked down upon to be of mixed race, or even talk to those outside your race. Though its not true of all people.
Now since (if I understood the LS3 good ending correctly), Dansa was cast out of Avalon, but technically not killed, he was made mortal like Valmont.. So I got the Idea that he could have escaped from the legioneers and fled to prehaps the "unknown" area. (or prehaps is curse with immortality like Iguo, some how). and waits 'til the world is on the brink of Choas, so he can raise back up to Avalon to unlesh his revenge on the other gods.
BUT.. of course the other gods are aware of his plans and select a new person to conter Dansa.. And not to be cliche, I think it would be good to make the new character a 18 year old, female halfling(elf/human), that has a distrust in everyone and everything, due to a rough life of homelessness and shuning from both sides of her family. She is living outta her "car" and works at a a witch supply shop in the back doing the inventory and things like that. She has strange dreams that seem as if they're past event of a time long ago (what happens in the real LS series). Oh and the person that runs the shop that she works for is often commentted on how he never seems to age. hehe..
Thats basically the e-mail I sent him, I just fixed somethings..
I have alotta ideas for it, but I don't wanna ruin anything if people like it. Of course.. I'm not gonna start on anything until I get Kamau promission to do it.. though I already draw the main character, but I can use that picture for anything..
Well I'll appericate any feedback, and don't worry when I write I check anything over.. usually.
There might be some spoilers.. y'know.
Anyway here is the idea: The setting is a in the way into the future. Judging from the time-line, I'll put it somewhere around the year 5000 HD. And basically the world of Beryllusir has change much and forgotten much of its history due to the growing levity of the newer grenations and the lack of Dansa keeping mankind down. Many things that were common place are now rare, or decerations (like orbs, and swords and such). Cities have grown so large that the merge together, creating subburbs and other areas. Most of the people have grown tired of the governments in the world, yet are to lazy to raise up and attemp revolution. So, basically it would become alot like how things are on earth.. with the exception of the other races, like Fellans, Kobolds, etc. The races generally keep themselves seperately and its generally looked down upon to be of mixed race, or even talk to those outside your race. Though its not true of all people.
Now since (if I understood the LS3 good ending correctly), Dansa was cast out of Avalon, but technically not killed, he was made mortal like Valmont.. So I got the Idea that he could have escaped from the legioneers and fled to prehaps the "unknown" area. (or prehaps is curse with immortality like Iguo, some how). and waits 'til the world is on the brink of Choas, so he can raise back up to Avalon to unlesh his revenge on the other gods.
BUT.. of course the other gods are aware of his plans and select a new person to conter Dansa.. And not to be cliche, I think it would be good to make the new character a 18 year old, female halfling(elf/human), that has a distrust in everyone and everything, due to a rough life of homelessness and shuning from both sides of her family. She is living outta her "car" and works at a a witch supply shop in the back doing the inventory and things like that. She has strange dreams that seem as if they're past event of a time long ago (what happens in the real LS series). Oh and the person that runs the shop that she works for is often commentted on how he never seems to age. hehe..
Thats basically the e-mail I sent him, I just fixed somethings..
I have alotta ideas for it, but I don't wanna ruin anything if people like it. Of course.. I'm not gonna start on anything until I get Kamau promission to do it.. though I already draw the main character, but I can use that picture for anything..
Well I'll appericate any feedback, and don't worry when I write I check anything over.. usually.
, i don't know, i hope not. 
