new song...

[SickAndWretched]

I wrote a new song just now.. and I'd like feed back.. prephaps even an anylization. but please don't be stupid and post 1 word responses and please state your opinions in detail...

~~~~~~~~~~"Want..."~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I can buy you dinner..
I can be your sinner..
but I cannot save you..
and will just drag you down.

Can you taste the lonliness?
Can I install the doubt?
Is it all just a mirage?
So much confusion in a kiss.

Take one but don't pass the rest.
What'd you do it for? just a test?
No body cared for the pest.
Somewhat burnt into your chest.

I can buy you dinner..
I can be your sinner..
but I cannot save you..

I will darg you down..
to the ground..
Craving words no one can read.

All have fled..
All were dead..
and everything was impotent
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

there you go..

[Genin]

:DCool, sounds like a song Wierd Al would make parody of. Ummm...... still wondering about that 'buy you dinner' part

[Mr. E]

Sounds cool!

[Chickensoupcheese]

Another twisted love song?

The lyrics are probably even more obscure than the last set, but they're still pretty good.

I think it's about loving someone whom you know is no good for you, yet loving no one else. True love is known to crop up in some weird places.

[SickAndWretched]

well its not even a love song.. not really.. more just about lust.. but I hope it can be intrepted differently..