Zatham
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Post by Zatham on Jul 15, 2003 23:58:51 GMT -5
'Kay so there's nothing better than elabourating on one of the "neglected" characters of Legion Saga, RIGHT? Well of course I took matters into my own hands and decided to give Chibiki some spotlight. I love Chibiki XD Anyway yes so I'm good at RPG Making and all that and I'm a total perfectionist for some reason so that's why I never end up getting my games out. That's where this spinoff comes in handy! I want to make medium-length game... something light and airy (..) and just fun to play. Alright so Kamau informed me that Chibiki's father was a high-ranking official in Kaiser Granstem's army but became disgusted with Granstem's ways and retreated to the mountains of Veramonde where he build a house and became a blacksmith. That's where he made "Gatts' Sword" (the sword Chibiki used in Legion Saga 2) So those are the parameters I have to work by. So, from that, I made this long complex storyline and all that and I realized that that really isn't... for *this* game. I just want something fun  with a bit of a story in it. So (I say that a lot ...) if you guys can think of anything to get me started or just like anything at all I'd really appreciate it. Oh and it would also be good if you could throw in a fortune teller or something in there because I made a really cool fortune teller-looking char :x Anyway thanks!! |
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Post by Magi on Jul 16, 2003 0:20:53 GMT -5
Someone else already did something like that. Think it was cancelled. Did you get Kamau's permission to do that?
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Post by theblakeman on Jul 16, 2003 1:26:45 GMT -5
Alright so Kamau informed me that Chibiki's father was a high-ranking official in Kaiser Granstem's army but became disgusted with Granstem's ways and retreated to the mountains of Veramonde where he build a house and became a blacksmith. That's where he made "Gatts' Sword" (the sword Chibiki used in Legion Saga 2) So those are the parameters I have to work by. Sounds like Godo in Berserk, RIGHT KAMAU? ;D |
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Post by Zatham on Jul 16, 2003 1:52:25 GMT -5
Well I kinda got permission. I haven't done anything official yet like screenshots or anything I just "pitched the idea" and he wasn't like DEAR GOD NO!!! And yeah he mentioned something about .. Berserk?  P.S There are those two tunes from LS2 I like... one is like re2_wreckage and re2_sanctuary or something. What game does the re2 stand for? |
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Post by Josh Yuy on Jul 16, 2003 1:55:10 GMT -5
It stands for Resident Evil 2, thats what it says on the music page on the main website.
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Post by Kamau on Jul 16, 2003 5:21:46 GMT -5
Her father was a member of Tuda's army (Granstem's father. Then when Tuda was assinated during the war, his son Granstem took the throne.
And yes, the blacksmith part is a little like Berserk which is why I said you should probably change the name of the sword. Her sword in LS2 was a little reference to Berserk but if you're making a whole game out of it then it needs changing.
I'm not sure if Godo was a former knight though...?
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Post by Busterman Zero on Jul 16, 2003 10:45:41 GMT -5
Well, it's about time there was a LS game featuring a woman. I'd of done it, but Lance is cool...
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Post by Gav on Jul 16, 2003 12:49:33 GMT -5
How about Kaiser Granstem wants the sword so he sends an assassin to kill Chibiki's father. He has only recently left the army, and because he has been there so long he has never been around for his daughter. His daughter arrives at his hut to reconcile and talk to her bestranged father, only to find him dead. She seeks revenge for the death of the father she never knew, partly because she loved him and partly because she wants to learn more about him through the journey.
Throw in some whacky characters and it might be good.
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Post by Zatham on Jul 17, 2003 2:19:32 GMT -5
Thank you Gav! I appreciate it.  But in the meantime of you typing that I called up my friend (she likes making stories??) and we worked it out. This seems very basic being typed out so don't be too .. picky anyway. Alright so in the beginning there was Chibiki's mother and father (wow!). Chibiki's mother died giving birth to Chibiki. Alright. So Chibiki's father, who was busy serving under King Tuda, enlisted the help of his mother to take care of baby Chibiki. After King Tuda was murdered and Kaiser Granstem took over, Chibiki's father was let in on a great deal of Kaiser Granstem's plan to do... evil things. Mason didn't like this! He was like "I don't like this!" ... and decided it would be best if Chibiki and her grandmother fled to the countryside away from Granstem's kingdom. Okay so one day Kaiser Granstem was like "I WANT TO SPREAD MY SEED! *spreads his seed*". So he went to one of his top officers (a man named Gatts) and tried to rape his wife. She resisted and ended up getting killed by him. Gatts told Chibiki's Father what Granstem had done and for Chibiki's Father, that was the last straw! He left the army and hid in the mountains where he re-took up his passion for blacksmithery ... Gatts, on the other hand, stayed under Granstem's command. He was a very, very cowardly man and feared Granstem more than anything and was also intrigued by Granstem's power. When Chibiki comes of age (like 20 or so), her grandmother passes away. Just before she dies, her grandmother tells Chibiki about her father who had severed contact with them after fearing that Granstem's army would come both him and his family. Chibiki decides to go find her father! Her search for her father is the meat and potatoes of the story. The villain of the game is Gatts. After his wife's death he puts on a mask and calls himself "Geheimnis" (German for mystery! Oooh). After a resistance against Granstem forms in Veramonde (i.e Nastra, Sazaku, etc.) Granstem realizes he must sever all the loose ties of his army... this includes Chibiki's father. If the resistance got ahold of the information Chibiki's father knows of then Granstem's in deep doodoo! So Granstem sends Gatts/Geheimnis and his troop searching for Chibiki's father. Oh and to spoil things... in the end I'm planning to have Geheimnis, of course, reveal himself as Gatts. Before he dies or whatever, he gives his sword to Chibiki and tells her that her father gave it to him before he left! You know, since he's a blacksmith and all... which explains why in Legion Saga 2, Chibiki has a sword named Gatts' Sword!  Okay done. I'm looking for constructive criticism here people! |
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Post by Busterman Zero on Jul 17, 2003 10:32:49 GMT -5
Resistance? I thought Nastra just plain murdered his dad.
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Post by Gav on Jul 17, 2003 12:21:12 GMT -5
That sounds good. I'll look forward to playing it.
I tried to make a fan game myself but my lack of self confidence made me abandon it.
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Post by Zatham on Jul 17, 2003 16:00:04 GMT -5
Well... he did just plain murder his dad But if Granstem was such a horrible leader than naturally a resistance would form! Nastra and Sazaku were just... bad examples that came off of the top of my head. |
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Post by Busterman Zero on Jul 17, 2003 23:32:11 GMT -5
Well Sazaku could of tried to kill Granstem but Nastra beat him to the punch...AGAIN.
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with a bit of a story in it.
Okay done. I'm looking for constructive criticism here people!