Post by EightSlicesOfPie on May 17, 2004 20:19:28 GMT -5
Alright, I'm in a band called The Unsung Heroes, and I wrote three songs for it that I'd like some feedback on.
I CAN'T FEEL
I can’t feel
What I want to feel
I don’t know
What I want to know
I can’t breathe
When I need to breathe
It’s times like these when my
[MIND DECEIVES ME]
I CAN’T FEEL
ANYTHING I WANT
[Simply to get rid of this bind]
I CAN’T FEEL
ANYTHING I NEED
[Stopping my mind]
[From committing this crime]
I DON’T KNOW
WHAT I NEED TO KNOW
My senses pouring out of me...
Won’t let me feel
What I want to feel
Won’t let me know
What I want to know
Won’t let me breathe
When I need to breathe
[My senses pouring out of me...]
Because it’s times like these
When my mind deceives me (x4, 4th time slow paced)
Cuz
I CAN’T BREATHE
WHEN I NEED TO BREATHE
[Simply to get out of this bind]
I CAN’T FEEL
ANYTHING I NEED
[Stopping my mind]
[From committing this crime]
MY SENSES POURING OUT OF ME! (x2)
I wanna go back in TIME
Stopping my mind from committing this CRIME
I wanna go back in TIME
Simply to step myself
Out of this BIND (x3)
My senses pouring (x2)
OUT OF ME!
I CAN’T FEEL
ANYTHING I NEED
I WANNA GO BACK IN TIME
GET RID OF THIS BIND
I CAN’T BREATHE
WHEN I NEED TO BREATHE
I WANNA GO BACK IN TIME
STOPPING MY MIND FROM [committing this crime]
RIGHT NOW!!!
-end background music-
My senses pouring out of me...
INSIDE ME
I thought I knew what aggravation was
I’ve eaten from the insane root that imprisons reason
It’s in my stomach like fire, like cancer, like a knife
I’ve been shot
I gotta let it go, yeah
It’s in my stomach like fire,
It’s in my stomach like cancer,
It’s in my stomach like a knife, I’ve been
Shot!
d**n! No where else to be,
Dying deep inside of me
Always standing on the inside looking out
Can’t break a heart so strong with pride
It’s more than just being alive
I broke the rule with you,
I’m out!
My only antidote to mental suffering
Is physical pain
It’s in my stomach like fire, like cancer, like a knife
I’ve been shot
I gotta let it go, yeah
It’s in my stomach like fire,
It’s in my stomach like cancer,
It’s in my stomach like a knife, I’ve been
Shot!
d**n! No where else to be,
Dying deep inside of me
Always standing on the inside looking out
Can’t break a heart so strong with pride
It’s more than just being alive
I broke the rule with you,
I’m out!
GIRL I'M WAITING FOR
My parents hate me
And I've got no friends
I can't get a girl
When will this end?
My teachers hate me
What can—I—do?
But, you know, things haven't been that bad
Since I met you
She's the girl I'm waiting for
The girl I wanna see when I walk out the door
The girl who makes it better when I am sore
The one who I'll be with forevermore
I'm sure
The girl that I'm waiting for
Now, things were lookin up
I had the best thing in the world
She was the perfect girl for me
She made me so happy
But then one day she left me
Why? She wouldn't tell
Everything came crashing down
My life turned into a living hell
She's the girl I'm waiting for
The girl I wanna see when I walk out the door
The girl who makes it better when I am sore
The one who I'll be with forevermore
I'm sure
The girl that I'm waiting for
So now, my parents hate me
And I'll still have no friends
I lost my only girlfriend
When will this end?
My teachers hate me
What can I do?
I guess the best thing would be
To forget about you.
She's the girl I'm waiting for
The girl I wanna see when I walk out the door
The girl who makes it better when I am sore
The one who I'll be with forevermore
I'm sure
The girl that I'm waiting for
She's the girl I'm waiting for
The girl I wanna see when I walk out the door
The girl who makes it better when I am sore
The one who I'll be with forevermore
I'm sure
The girl that I'm waiting for...
I CAN'T FEEL
I can’t feel
What I want to feel
I don’t know
What I want to know
I can’t breathe
When I need to breathe
It’s times like these when my
[MIND DECEIVES ME]
I CAN’T FEEL
ANYTHING I WANT
[Simply to get rid of this bind]
I CAN’T FEEL
ANYTHING I NEED
[Stopping my mind]
[From committing this crime]
I DON’T KNOW
WHAT I NEED TO KNOW
My senses pouring out of me...
Won’t let me feel
What I want to feel
Won’t let me know
What I want to know
Won’t let me breathe
When I need to breathe
[My senses pouring out of me...]
Because it’s times like these
When my mind deceives me (x4, 4th time slow paced)
Cuz
I CAN’T BREATHE
WHEN I NEED TO BREATHE
[Simply to get out of this bind]
I CAN’T FEEL
ANYTHING I NEED
[Stopping my mind]
[From committing this crime]
MY SENSES POURING OUT OF ME! (x2)
I wanna go back in TIME
Stopping my mind from committing this CRIME
I wanna go back in TIME
Simply to step myself
Out of this BIND (x3)
My senses pouring (x2)
OUT OF ME!
I CAN’T FEEL
ANYTHING I NEED
I WANNA GO BACK IN TIME
GET RID OF THIS BIND
I CAN’T BREATHE
WHEN I NEED TO BREATHE
I WANNA GO BACK IN TIME
STOPPING MY MIND FROM [committing this crime]
RIGHT NOW!!!
-end background music-
My senses pouring out of me...
INSIDE ME
I thought I knew what aggravation was
I’ve eaten from the insane root that imprisons reason
It’s in my stomach like fire, like cancer, like a knife
I’ve been shot
I gotta let it go, yeah
It’s in my stomach like fire,
It’s in my stomach like cancer,
It’s in my stomach like a knife, I’ve been
Shot!
d**n! No where else to be,
Dying deep inside of me
Always standing on the inside looking out
Can’t break a heart so strong with pride
It’s more than just being alive
I broke the rule with you,
I’m out!
My only antidote to mental suffering
Is physical pain
It’s in my stomach like fire, like cancer, like a knife
I’ve been shot
I gotta let it go, yeah
It’s in my stomach like fire,
It’s in my stomach like cancer,
It’s in my stomach like a knife, I’ve been
Shot!
d**n! No where else to be,
Dying deep inside of me
Always standing on the inside looking out
Can’t break a heart so strong with pride
It’s more than just being alive
I broke the rule with you,
I’m out!
GIRL I'M WAITING FOR
My parents hate me
And I've got no friends
I can't get a girl
When will this end?
My teachers hate me
What can—I—do?
But, you know, things haven't been that bad
Since I met you
She's the girl I'm waiting for
The girl I wanna see when I walk out the door
The girl who makes it better when I am sore
The one who I'll be with forevermore
I'm sure
The girl that I'm waiting for
Now, things were lookin up
I had the best thing in the world
She was the perfect girl for me
She made me so happy
But then one day she left me
Why? She wouldn't tell
Everything came crashing down
My life turned into a living hell
She's the girl I'm waiting for
The girl I wanna see when I walk out the door
The girl who makes it better when I am sore
The one who I'll be with forevermore
I'm sure
The girl that I'm waiting for
So now, my parents hate me
And I'll still have no friends
I lost my only girlfriend
When will this end?
My teachers hate me
What can I do?
I guess the best thing would be
To forget about you.
She's the girl I'm waiting for
The girl I wanna see when I walk out the door
The girl who makes it better when I am sore
The one who I'll be with forevermore
I'm sure
The girl that I'm waiting for
She's the girl I'm waiting for
The girl I wanna see when I walk out the door
The girl who makes it better when I am sore
The one who I'll be with forevermore
I'm sure
The girl that I'm waiting for...