"Underworld" - Poetry

[Kaijin]

I was inspired to write this poem after watching the film "Underworld". It is based souly on the moral of the movie. Give feedback.

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Underworld

Imagine a black void,
Compiled with hatred,
And immortality,
Two enemy species,
Devouring day by day,
Blood thirsty beasts,
Bound by darkness,
Awakening the Gods,
Knowing all fate,
One day soon,
Life will end,
But until then,
Fight with purpose.

[Gimdin7]

Kaijin, please put your poems in one thread.

[theblakeman]

You wrote this because of a movie? A f**king terrible movie at that? Wow. The poem seems pretty uninspired in spite of its source of inspiration.

[Chickensoupcheese]

I apologise, but it feels most suited to a cheesy voiceover on the Underworld trailer. And if you want a real 'vampire film with morals', then go see "Interview with the Vampire", which is open to quite a wide interpretation.