A set of lyrics..

[Chickensoupcheese]

This is a set of lyrics that I wrote when I was in a mood . Before making the effort to provide the backing track, I wouldn't mind knowing if they were any good, and of any changes that I could perhaps make.

Here we go:

Celestial Eternity

Mile long list of things I could have said;
Mile long list of things I should have said;
Docking bay opens for a new ship;
In burning flames I'm bound to fall with it.

Come with me, we'll sail right through the stars;
Come with me, we'll sail right through the stars..

Straight into a black hole my worries fall,
Following a metal reflection of myself.
I'm feeling weightless and defying gravity,
Amongst the open celestial eternity.

Come with me, we'll sail right through the stars,
Come with me, we'll sail right through the stars.
Space Station X is opening its doors,
Fade to black, an end to astro-discourse.

A thousand angels light my midnight sky.
A thousands astronauts in search of a better life.
Space Station X is opening its doors,
Fade to black, an end to terra-discord.

Come with me, we'll sail right through the stars..
Come with me, we'll sail right through the stars..
Come with me, we'll sail right through the stars..
Come with me, we'll sail right through the stars..

(And so on..)

[SickAndWretched]

I like it.. for some reason it reminds me of a Smashing Pumpkins song or Radiohead song.. they're pretty good..

[Chickensoupcheese]

I spent most of my day listening to OK Computer, that could be an explanation ^_^.