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Post by SickAndWretched on Sept 19, 2003 20:58:16 GMT -5
I wrote a new song just now.. and I'd like feed back.. prephaps even an anylization. but please don't be stupid and post 1 word responses and please state your opinions in detail...
~~~~~~~~~~"Want..."~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I can buy you dinner.. I can be your sinner.. but I cannot save you.. and will just drag you down.
Can you taste the lonliness? Can I install the doubt? Is it all just a mirage? So much confusion in a kiss.
Take one but don't pass the rest. What'd you do it for? just a test? No body cared for the pest. Somewhat burnt into your chest.
I can buy you dinner.. I can be your sinner.. but I cannot save you..
I will darg you down.. to the ground.. Craving words no one can read.
All have fled.. All were dead.. and everything was impotent ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
there you go..
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Genin
RPG Townie
Hey guys, I can see for mil--- aaaghhhh(~SLAM~)
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Post by Genin on Sept 20, 2003 8:17:11 GMT -5
:DCool, sounds like a song Wierd Al would make parody of. Ummm...... still wondering about that 'buy you dinner' part
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Mr. E
RPG Townie
i r kenshin. bow befour me.
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Post by Mr. E on Sept 20, 2003 11:19:20 GMT -5
Sounds cool!
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Post by Chickensoupcheese on Sept 20, 2003 13:14:25 GMT -5
Another twisted love song? The lyrics are probably even more obscure than the last set, but they're still pretty good. I think it's about loving someone whom you know is no good for you, yet loving no one else. True love is known to crop up in some weird places.
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Post by SickAndWretched on Sept 20, 2003 18:23:07 GMT -5
well its not even a love song.. not really.. more just about lust.. but I hope it can be intrepted differently..
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