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Post by SickAndWretched on Sept 4, 2003 21:05:20 GMT -5
Hello everyone.. I'm wondering what people think of the song I recently finished. anyway here it is: "Tod the impressionist"
What is beauty? Its locked inside her eyes.. He has become.. her pure despise.. He wants to care.. To revive whats died.. To f**ked up.. She does not realize..
Its all under ice... Its all under the ice... Its all under ice... Forgot something twice..
He woke up late.. In a cold sweat.. Couldn't masturbate.. He was to obsessed.. At this rate.. He'll fall from off his cloud.. To f**ked up.. He'll never forget..
Its all under ice... Its all under the ice... Its all under ice... Blinded at a time..
He sees her in.. What he calles "his dreams".. All that has been.. Is now all that gleamed.. Climb out of the drain.. A long slide back.. To f**ked up.. All that hasn't been..
Its all under ice... Its all under the ice... Its all under ice... Can't escape from her eyes... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
if you vote, could you please post your opinions about it.. Prehaps even anylize it..
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Post by Forbidden on Sept 5, 2003 7:15:58 GMT -5
Hey all! Let's masturbate... under the ice! -_-'
Cool? Cool. Cool... cool! Cool? Cool... the ice is cool!
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Post by SickAndWretched on Sept 5, 2003 14:42:28 GMT -5
hehe.. well I guess you didn't like it much just realized I messed up chorus... so I'll fix that.. Though I'd like more feed back please..
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Post by Perkele on Sept 6, 2003 8:11:57 GMT -5
it's lil' bit strange.
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Post by Chickensoupcheese on Sept 6, 2003 8:38:47 GMT -5
I'm wayy too tired at the moment to start analysing them, but they seem to me to be pretty good. I can tell (perhaps by the fact that they will need to be analysed to be fully understood) that you've put a certain degree of thought into them, too, which helps . I could see Trent happily (or unhappily, as may be the case) singing/screaming along to it. I haven't managed to find a way of making my own lyrics not suck yet, but I'll prolly post when I do .
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Hanzatre the Hippie
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Post by Hanzatre the Hippie on Sept 6, 2003 12:30:09 GMT -5
Hey all! Let's masturbate... under the ice! -_-'
Cool? Cool. Cool... cool! Cool? Cool... the ice is cool!
Hee hee nice one Zeeph
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Post by Lankyrie on Sept 6, 2003 12:35:07 GMT -5
Hey all! Let's masturbate... under the ice! -_-'
Cool? Cool. Cool... cool! Cool? Cool... the ice is cool!
Masturbate under the ice? What it does have with good lyric.
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Hanzatre the Hippie
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Post by Hanzatre the Hippie on Sept 6, 2003 12:45:42 GMT -5
Sano don't start that fighting again.
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Post by Chickensoupcheese on Sept 6, 2003 13:30:26 GMT -5
As far as I'm concerned, Sano wsn't starting a fight, just asking what Zeephos' comment had to do with the above lyrics. It looks to me like Zeephos was not particularly impressed with the lyrics, and just mocked them. My own interpretation of the song is that Tod is a person who has attempted to create himself an alternate personality to disguise his cold interior. He wants to be accepted by "her", but she can see through his newly created shell and see him for what he really is. If we do make mistakes that harm others, and if these are conscious decisions, then it is extremely unlikely that we shall be forgiven for them. We have a love song, albeit one concerned more with not getting the girl and the accompanying self-pity as opposed to a happy ending. ..at least that's what I saw when I looked into it. That could be entirely different to what you had in mind when writing it, but that's the beauty of lyrics such as these: open to interpretation .
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Post by Forbidden on Sept 6, 2003 15:35:09 GMT -5
As far as I'm concerned, Sano wsn't starting a fight, just asking what Zeephos' comment had to do with the above lyrics. It looks to me like Zeephos was not particularly impressed with the lyrics, and just mocked them. What the hell? What ever made you guys think "Zeeph" didn't like the lyrics? I really did like the lyrics, and me mentioning "the ice" all the time shows that.
By the way: Once again Sano, you steal something from others and think it's cool. Like your nickname -- my old MSN Messenger nickname.
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Post by Mr. E on Sept 6, 2003 15:40:02 GMT -5
I like it!
It's strange, but I like it! ;D
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Post by Chickensoupcheese on Sept 6, 2003 16:23:50 GMT -5
What ever made you guys think "Zeeph" didn't like the lyrics? The way that you phrased your comment made it seem as if you were being sarcastic, as well as the "-_-". Sorry for misunderstanding . Yeah, they are pretty strange, but I'm getting of rough idea of the influences of them, and they were pretty strange too, so it's unsurprising .
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Post by SickAndWretched on Sept 6, 2003 17:37:59 GMT -5
CSC has got a general idea of it.. basically any of my songs are meant by writen abstract enough to be strange and easily interpret many different ways. Of course there is a real litteral interpetation of things song, but CSC interpeted pretty good. y'know no wrong way to interpet things.. well at least art..
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Post by Lankyrie on Sept 7, 2003 2:31:47 GMT -5
By the way: Once again Sano, you steal something from others and think it's cool. Like your nickname -- my old MSN Messenger nickname.
Shut up, Zeeph. You DO think those names are original. Blademaster is in many RPGs, so don't think it's yours. You're really doing that for annoying me, and getting no warns. You really think you are some king of Town, but you're not. If I am admin of this place, I have banned you forever. Hanzatre- You have said many times to me, that Zeeph is an idiot. So don't trying to play you like Zeeph.
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Post by Hanzatre the Hippie on Sept 7, 2003 4:32:26 GMT -5
Shut up, Zeeph. You DO think those names are original. Blademaster is in many RPGs, so don't think it's yours. You're really doing that for annoying me, and getting no warns. You really think you are some king of Town, but you're not. If I am admin of this place, I have banned you forever. Hanzatre- You have said many times to me, that Zeeph is an idiot. So don't trying to play you like Zeeph. Gee hey I'mnot on anybodys side but i'm on everybody's side so that is why I'm Hanzatre The Hippie................and if I said Zeeph is an idiot that doesn't mean I couldn't chance my mind.
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