On the Wings of Time

[Smaug]

Hey everybody, a while ago, I explained a game that I was making on rm2k3 called Dawn of Ragnarok. well, I cancelled that game and started a new one.
Here it is:

On the Wings of Time
BASIC PLOT (very Basic):
Since the beginning of time, the six countries in the world of Asgaea have each had in their grasp an orb. Legend has it that these six orbs were bestowed upon the human race by the Six Sages of Asgaea. The orbs contained all the power of the sages. They were given these orbs to maintain balance to the world.
Each country was supposed to protect their orb at all costs, for the sages left their trust in the lowly hands of the human beings, and if this trust had ever been broken, the world would go into a state of limbo and all time would lose meaning.
It is said that if someone were to obtain all the orbs, the orbs would fuse together, making one single orb. And that orb would give the user absolute power over Asgaea....

The story begins in the year 1881 A.D. Berel, one of Asgaea's most powerful countries, has been waging wars with other countries for years because the king claims that his country may never be safe from these "weapons" unless he posessed them all. But is that the real reason why he wants them?
The country of Berel has so far obtained every orb necessary, except for two, The Chrono Orb, and The Climate Orb. And they have found who owns the Chrono Orb, The neighboring country of Clebenas.
They plan to wage war on Clebenas for the Orb.
This is when we meet Lance, an Ex-Commander of Berel Army. He has lived in his hometown of Cebel all his life. 5 years ago, he fought (what he thought was) his last war. And within that five year period he has lived in peace in Cebel. Until one day, he receives a letter from the king ordering him to fight and command his troops in the upcoming war.

What begins as a mere war, suddenly hurls Lance into a conflict with Time, his own country, and worst of all, his past...

Features:
-Custom Attributes System
-Improved DBS
-What you do in one time, may affect what happens in other times.
-Lots of Mini Games and Sidequests
-Cool Magic System
-The plot changes with the choices you make
-Alternate Endings
-Tons of secret weapons, characters, magic, and scenes to develop more storyline.
-You can see the monsters.
-More features to come.

Will be edited in future.
(p.s. in the meantime, tell me what you think of the plot and stuff. ;D )

[NeoPhoenixX]

I like the cause and effect idea, how your choices affect the overall storyline. It encourages more player interaction and makes the player a part of the story. I believe I saw a similar idea in Three The Hard Way; it's one of the things that actually made the game interesting to play.

[Rune Edge]

I like the cause and effect idea too but to make it any good, it'll take tons of work to include all the possibilities of what happens. If you can pull it off, it should be a good game.

PS. I'm Baaaaaaaaaaaaaack! YAY!

[Smaug]

Well, Say if you were in the present time zone, then you went back to the timezone in the past and planted a seed to a tree, and then went back to the present timezone, you could now access a treasure of some sort by climbing a tree that you planted. That's what I'm gonna do.

[hmm]

story sounds a bit cliche, with the whole orb thing and whatnot, but the features sound promising. Now ally ou have to do is pull it off.

[Smaug]

Well, there's more to the story, but I don't want to give it away because it will ruin the element of surprise. And I might change some stuff about it too.
But thanks for the comment.

[SickAndWretched]

hmm.. I'd like to see more progress then promise, y'know.